Secondary Characters Stealing the Show

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I used to write my secondary characters as place holders. They served a purpose and maybe had a name and then move on. I think they’re exerting revenge, because they’ve started coming out the woodwork and stealing my plot.

I didn’t notice at first. I was naive. It started with the innocent-seeming, doe-eyed character in one my series’ that dutifully played the best friend role. She was important, yes, and events surrounding her were sure to move the plot forward. One book is almost practically driven forward because of her.

Now my innocent little blonde friend is force-feeding me new interesting twists about herself that oh so conveniently set the stage up for her own story. Her own book, possibly even series, and I’m not even done talking about her best friend yet – who is supposed to be the star, hello. She’s whispering in my head when I should be working on different things. And just when I think she’s nice about it, she yanks me off my feet in a direction that she would like to go, thank you very much.

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So okay. Maybe she just really needs to tell her story.

But now it’s spreading.

Enter the second series, the first book of which I’m almost done with. This character was supposed to play a role, get a theme across, and provide a contrast to my main character and lay out some of that social commentary I have mentioned previously.

But oh no. Now she’s making herself really complicated and providing all this depth. The little vixen keeps hijacking what I’m trying to do with her character and pulling out these aching moments of vulnerable strength you can’t help but love. She’s not demanding her own book (yet) – thank god – but she’s seriously exacting her pound of flesh.

Arunninggoatsnd now she’s encouraging the other characters, too. Like a little circus master, her friends are starting to do and say things that I didn’t tell them to do.

It’s all going new and unforeseen places and I’m just stumbling along behind for the ride.

Okay, fine. Truth is, I can’t really complain. Writing for me takes on a life force of it’s own. I am not the master of my story; at some point I am just the tool of which these ideas enter this world. (Okay, well, obviously I control my craft, my art, my talent – but you understand, right? Right?) The story seizing it’s own destiny ends up creating something richer and better than what I had originally planned. It’s amazing to be along for the ride.

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10 responses to “Secondary Characters Stealing the Show”

  1. I understand. My stories play out like movies in my head, the characters moving as real as the people you meet and notice their shining strengths or hidden weaknesses. I don’t fight it. I just watch and make notes. When done, my book is written! It’s the editing that kills me. They want to reinforce their words, their motives and strike out sometimes, making me rewrite sequences!

    • I actually don’t mind editing too much! I like being able to go back and make things better. But I do sometimes freak myself out because I accidentally change the tone or flow of something, and I’m never sure if I’m changing things too much.

      And oh yes. The rewriting. I just took a section and it turned out to be 8k words longer by the end!

  2. Yes, secondary characters seem to grow a life of their own! I think it’s important to let them (and the readers ) think they’re ‘real’ life’s like that, too. You never know who’s going to be a major player in your life when you first meet them…?

    • Oh, for sure! I find it interesting how these characters are interweaving themselves in the story very much like in real life, how people will pop up when you least expect it and have a lasting impact.

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